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Submitted by amber35.xx

When you died you were meant to turn up at heaven’s gates, but instead you arrived at the gates of hell. You have to stay until things are set right, but you are starting to enjoy it in hell...

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Devilish Perspective.

“How did I end up here?”I ask myself. In the beginning the violent burning heat scorched my skin. Now it barely leaves a mark against my charred features. What was once a chaotic life being lived on earth was now chaotic in a whole new form. The mundane schedules to abide by replaced with slow excruciating forms of physical torture. Constantly feeling...

Oh Ok Jealousy Becomes You

You remind me of her —

the way you speak,

the way you try.

She envies me,

but she’ll never understand —

she could never measure up.


I’m Lacy, flawless, untouchable.

You?

You’re beneath me.

So keep your small words to yourself.

I’m done listening....

A Deal With The Devil

You’d think spending a week in Hell would be torture, pain, and beyond scary. Yet it’s been the best week I never got to have alive. And they say I have to leave tomorrow, but I have to think of a way for them to let me stay.


Because I was Heaven bound, the effects of Hell don’t work on me. They could lash me with a spiked whip, and I would feel absolutely nothing. My body wouldn’t even have a m...

Wrong Turn

Ahhh I sighed…sweet relief from the pain. Living with cancer sucked and the constant chemo treatment, well let’s just say left me feeling empty. I had followed the bright light and am on my way to those pearly gates but wait this isn’t the gates I suspected why is there a set of stairs with no hand railing going down.

 

I stood frozen and scared. I know I had done everything a good person does. I...

Hell?

Out of all the things that go unplanned, I think it’s safe to say that this was one of them. I still remember the bright light I started to see when I was reaching the end. I was just expecting something different. The second the bright light dissipated, a set of doors appeared in front of me. I cautiously walked through them and was surprised to find a waiting room filled with other people who lo...

Home

When I first arrived here I thought it wasn’t where I was meant to be. I was terrified. The long dark halls, the constant screams, fire everywhere shining way too bright at all hours. I didn’t know what to do. I felt stuck for so long, in this place of darkness and torture. I tried everything I could think of to get out of hell and return to the gates of heaven. Until one day, I just stopped. I st...

Downstairs

“This can’t be right.” I say with a panic. One moment I’m walking along the street in New York, minding my own business, and the next I’m who knows where. Standing under a massive gate that’s literally on fire.


I heard the car speeding down the street, but I had a green light. He hit me. Or he must of, because clearly this is some sort of after life. Clearly, I’m dead.


“Hell makes no mistakes.” ...

How I Was Made

Born youngest

Born free

A girl so curious

Her mind ran free

Born into a family

Both made from wealth and poverty

She started to wonder

If she could do more


So she began to read

Her mind filling in the blanks

That she could not see

As the seasons passed

She began to see

That not everyone

Is how they seem


Her family

A complicated dad

A sensitive mom

A brother, always mad

A sister, never coming hom...

Book Preview-

Okay so I saw this prompt a while ago and I started writing this, but since I saw it again I’ll give you a sneak peak lol.



“But, but this is hell.” I whispered. I could feel my skin burning from the heat of this underworld. The original destination was the golden gates outside of heaven.


“Sorry kid. It seems your good deeds sucked!” Flame laughed maniacally.


_I guess that bad deed was too hor...

Hell

I was free falling for what seemed like hours. I was racing through the sky like an Amtrak train. Or was that the ground? Thud! I peeled my eyes open before I could have another thought, to see the tallest flames I’ve ever seen dancing around me. I focused my vision to directly in front of me. Standing in a maid’s outfit was none other than Adolf Hitler. He was bent over in front of me with a pine...