Okay, here's that story transformed into a poem:
The oil, a slick betrayal,
Coated totes in a treacherous sheen,
Fluorescent lights glared, pale,
A cloying scent, a greasy scene.
Brian gone, I grabbed the TC,
Cool plastic against my palm,
Scanning quick, for all to see,
Salvaging goods, weathering the qualm.
Then Julie came, her voice a sting,
"Why that phone?" her eyes ablaze,
Damaged goods, I...