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Writing Prompt

WRITING OBSTACLE

Your character is stuck inside a rapidly deflating bouncy castle at a fair.

In this scene, juxtapose their panic with the joyful surroundings of a summer fair.

Writings

A Good Omen

Who goes to the fair alone? Old creepy men probably. But really, no one truly goes to the fair alone. No one in their right mind anyway. And I have not been in my right mind all day.


In fact I had 3 bad omens before I got myself into the situation that I did. Now I know what you’re thinking, three bad things all in one day. I should have gone home, eaten straight from the ice cream carton and ca...

Cat In The Castle

My human knows not of what he speaks. They’ve always been too stupid anyhow! They can’t even catch their own food, and when I do it for them what do I get? My hunt thrown in the stinky bucket!! So why should I listen to them now? Thrice now they’ve pulled me away from the whirring colorful castle. It is filled with the screams of the tiny humans. I should not desire to enter this accursed chamber ...

Bouncing, Still

The little girl was bouncing higher and higher and higher. Her once carefully plaited braids flipped around with the beat. Her face was enveloped by a gapped toothed smile.

Her light blue eyes squinted with glee at every bounce. Her fingertips barely missed the top of the castle by a whisp.


On every bounce her blue pettycoat flew up towards her face. She giggled as she tried to pat it down. It ...

Draft

It’s collapsing

I can’t get out

Cries of panic

Screams of laughter


Fun at the fair

Bouncy house tear

Not ever a fear

Drowning in tears...

Lilly vs Bouncy Castle

She loved the fair

Especially the bouncy castle

She jumped

And jumped

And played some games


Then it began

The deflation


Lilly had to escape

The deflating castle


It flattened

And flattened

More

And more


It was slowly covering her

Lilly was soon completely covered

By the deflated castle

She had to find a way out


She crawled around

Trying to find an escape


Then she saw it

A glimpse of ...

Fanfiction

I kind of want to start writing fanfiction, just for fun, i don’t know if people would read it, and I have never done it before…. I dont have a ton of interests its mostly Harry Potter and Mauraders because they are my whole personality, if I could have tips it would be awesome, if not here is some flowers šŸ’ happy late valentines day. I will write a poem too.


The castle deflates

Trapping me in

L...

Parish Fair Day

ā€œThis is the biggest bouncy castle I’ve ever seen!ā€, shouted Caleb. It was our first time at the parish fair. Usually I spent Parish Fair Day inside, not by my own admission but by the requirement from my mother that I clean the house.


This year however, my parents were out of town now that I was old enough to be trusted at the house by myself. The ole’ ā€œdon’t open this door for nobody while I’m...

Bouncy House Of Horrors

ā€œWe’re too old for this.ā€ I grumbled as Sasha drags me along. The fair is packed as we weave between the crowds, the smell of popcorn and corn dogs is thick in the air.

ā€œOh please!ā€ She laughs as she tugs me. ā€œYou’re such a Debbie Downer.ā€ She teases.

I roll my eyes, but follow after her.


She leads me towards the front of the fair, she giggles as she sees a bouncy castle. Bright blue, yellow and ...

The Day

ā€œDude it was fricken crazyā€


ā€œNo way! you were inside man?!ā€


ā€œYeah dude, and I kid you not, no one even noticedā€ an annoyed look creeps on my face,

ā€œthe kid had a pocket knife with him and popped the jumpy houseā€


ā€œAnd then what happened?ā€ My friend asks as he sips on his caprisun holding an uncrustable,


ā€œHere I am tryna find this exit, but every time I step, the floor just sinks manā€ my eyes ...

At The Family Fun Fair

There was just something special about this bouncy house. Andy couldn’t explain. The Dayton Family Fun Fair was anything but.


Outside kids were running back and forth. Old people rock music was blaring. Mom had insisted Andy play in the bounce house. He kicked up a fuss but he relented in case mommy made him go face painting with Olive. Shuddering Andy snuggled deeper into the plastic.


First i...

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