WRITING OBSTACLE

Your character is stuck inside a rapidly deflating bouncy castle at a fair.

In this scene, juxtapose their panic with the joyful surroundings of a summer fair.

Draft

It’s collapsing

I can’t get out

Cries of panic

Screams of laughter


Fun at the fair

Bouncy house tear

Not ever a fear

Drowning in tears

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