POEM STARTER
Submitted by SmileyGuitar
Write a poem that starts in a cheerful, bright mood, but then reveals underlying anger or bitterness.
Pain?
My day was great
My day was swell
Was and my friends house
Till everything
crumbled and fell
I don’t feel good
I actually feel awful
Had to leave early
For its what seemed lawful
Bled through my clothes
Took so much ibuprofen
Cried over soda
Slept for 2 hours
Showered twice
Will it fix me if i sit in rice?
It hurts to move
My legs oh my lord
Had blood work done last week
So they can tell me whats wrong
Hopefully my case
doesn’t make the doctors bored
So far I have just been pushed off
Only one doctor seems to care
That its heavy and It hurts
Thats its getting hard to bear
My legs are on fire
My stomach too
I either want to eat everything
Or nothing but chocolate and soup
Sorry if this poem
Weirds out the general public
Its real and its raw
And just because i feel like shit
does not been my writings should be shit too