POEM STARTER

Submitted by 🌖🧚🏽🪻Oddity ✨🐜🥀

Too Much Peace

Write a poem inspired by or containing these words. Is there such a thing as too much peace?

Deprived Of Validation

Too much peace sounds impossible , but what can be worse the constant voices in your mind that no one can ever find or the sweet sound of nothing .


I don’t even get notification on my phone anymore not even a hi how you been because maybe I’m not seen .


my own thoughts make it hard to express my feeling a game that I’m not willing to play , I get it no one really want to stay and talk so I just watch the walk away .


You see sometime conversation can be a bore ! But when your deprived of interaction your heart begin to sore just begging for someone to offer a glance to give you the chance to feel wanted .

Comments 4

Ugh, people suck sometimes. Nobody deserves to feel neglected or alone. So even if people you know in person haven’t said it, here’s me saying “hi how you been”

Poetry allows us to say how we feel without being judged. Allowing ourselves to express feelings through writing is a powerful tool when things get overwhelming. It gives a sense of peace but we cannot allow ourselves to be sucked into the world of silence for too long because it will grow deeper and deeper and then we will lose sight of the surface

pls give me some poetry tips 🌷