WRITING OBSTACLE
Submitted by Maranda Quinn
Show a powerful emotion – love, grief, rage - in a quiet, everyday moment.
Instead of writing a dramatic and drawn out scene, think about how subtle actions and sensory details can carry the weight of the feeling.
sunday morning
broken ceramic plate on the kitchen tile
pancakes i woke up at 5 am to make you
strewn across the ground
whipped cream slicing snowy slivers across my face
my hands are sticky
your hands are bleeding
glue the cuts shut with my syrup-stained fingers
kiss you better with my strawberry lips
the oven burners sit between us,
flickering firelight flames
i wanted to switch to electric but
you said no
fork clatters against the table
at least the knife is still untouched,
shiny and clean from the fresh dishwasher run i ran
just before you came down
coffee stings my legs,
deep brown spreading across the pale-cushioned chair
i am ok but
the pancakes are being eaten by ants
the plate is broken
i can’t reach you
and the fork isn’t clean anymore
your hands are bleeding
i am ok
but are you?