Aspire to Inspire

I’m a beginner teen writer, so please give me feedback on my pieces for ways to improve :)

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Aspire to Inspire

I’m a beginner teen writer, so please give me feedback on my pieces for ways to improve :)

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Thistle

Aspire to Inspire

2 min read

This is a bit like Sherlock, by the way, just a different mystery that you have to solve.

“I didn’t think about that.” Ash muttered.

Rune glared at him, a flicker of amusement in his eyes, “you don’t think about anything.” A small smirk creeped onto his face. There is was, that signature look.

Sighing and rolling his eyes, Ash looked back at the corpse at his feet. It truly was revolting.

It was ...

Mystery

Pain

Aspire to Inspire

1 min read

She stared at me for a moment, then plunged the knife into my stomach. I lift my eyes to meet hers, my gaze dark.

“You fool, pain doesn’t burden me, you know that.” I sneer, pulling the knife out. No blood. As expected. And yet I felt it, a sharp stinging feeling. But not in my stomach… in my chest? Why on Earth would that be?

Nyx didn’t speak, she merely stared at me, panting, her form shaking li...

Romance

Fantasy

Blood

Aspire to Inspire

1 min read

Around and around the blood whirls,

Finally going down the drains,

It turns the pipe a crimson red,

A reminder of all the pains,

You wash and wash continuously,

Yet violence always stains...

Poetry

Not About The Prompt!

Aspire to Inspire

1 min read

Narrated by 𝔇𝔢𝔞𝔱𝔥, the misanthrope that rules the world.

☠︎☠︎☠︎☠︎☠︎☠︎☠︎

Dying is easy. You just lie down and it arrives. It’s staying dead that’s the hard part. Every moment you are hoping for the sweet feeling of release, of relaxation after stress, of your name being called by the heavens themselves after being stuck in a waiting room that humans labelle...

Fantasy

Humour

Emily Davison

Aspire to Inspire

2 min read

“When the time comes, be ready.”

The words echoed in Emily’s mind… she meandered between the crowds, occasionally skidding to a halt, momentarily hesitating, then continuing forward. Seeds of doubt continued to blossom in her mind. Was this worth it? Would it even work? It didn’t matter. Mrs Pankhurst would be proud either way…

Surging onwards, she kept her hat far over her eyes and her gaze plan...

Action

The Light

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1 min read

Silas clutched at the mast of his ship (or what remained of his ship). He was shivering, water streaming down his skin and his hair clinging to his face. Curtains of darkness covered the blue sky, enveloping him in night. The constant wind sent tremors through him, swaying his boat, causing more wood to snap off, leaving a trail behind him. The salt water dried his lips and left a bitter taste in ...

Adventure

Time’s Up

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1 min read

Trembling, his breaths coming out as short, ragged gasps, Vai remained under the bed. His heart was pounding against his rib cage, like a wronged prisoner demanding freedom. The footsteps were growing louder, the ear-peircing screech of a sword being dragged across the floor echoing in his ears. Vai held his breath. A bead of sweat dripped down his forehead, along with a small crimson dot of blood...

Action

Unrequited

Aspire to Inspire

1 min read

“Hey, Silas?” I mutter, fidgeting with my hands, looking at the ground.

Looking at me with those beautiful eyes, he speaks, “mhm?”

I hesitate, my head winding and weaving, trying to come up with a way to say this without sounding like a complete creep, “I’ve got something to tell you.”

“Fire away.”

I look at his expectant expression… his blonde hair, tanned skin, freckles. My heart was fluttering...

Drama

Romance

The Feeling Was Mutual

Aspire to Inspire

2 min read

I sat at the dock, dangling my legs into the water, gazing into the distance. I could practically feel the blood on my feet, it was so much thicker than the murky water that rippled below me. And it was darker, oh so much darker. The crimson hue was like a fleeting cloud of red smoke, staining my skin and filling the air with a lingering sent of blood. I hated him, sure, but not enough for him to ...

Romance

Drama