STORY STARTER
Submitted by HardCoreWriter
I held her hand tight, and I wasn't ever letting go.
End or begin a story with this line.
Never Letting Go
If you told me to sit, I’d obey you like a dog
You could tear me apart, and I’d still love you
You know everything about me and you still stay
I’d do anything for you, pay any price to pay
Your the definition of perfection
Every word is my devotion
I don’t think I could breathe without you
My limerence for you is undying
I hold you in the highest regard
You’re everything to me
So I hold your hand tight, and I’m never letting go.
Idk if my comment went throughhh. Hiii I’m so happy to see your work again I love it!!!!
first line in and i was already hooked, but then again i am always a sucker for metaphors resolving around the behavior of dogs and how said behavior can correlate to us humans. with that said — stunning poetry!
This is beautiful work!
I still have writers block 😔 I’m trying to write more happy poems if you couldn’t tell…… I know it doesn’t really rhyme
