WRITING OBSTACLE
Write a gossip session between two friends which suddenly turns very serious.
How can you use dialogue and speech tags to convey the change of tone?
Chapter 65
in love with…
“i thought you were in
love with him?
i mean he’s
very obviously
in love
with you.”
little does she
know that
she is the love,
“no, i don’t
think i ever
was, because
i love
someone else.”
her face twists
to a nosy sort
of greed,
“care to
share?”
no
“sure”
i pause, she
sits expectantly,
“her eyes are
so blue that
i could drown in them.
freckles create constellations
across her nose.
her smile could
outshine the
sun, but
she will never be mine.”
she thinks
on my words, before
leaving for the
next class.
she does not
speak to me,
until only
a few hours after
school
a text,
that reads:
“you’re in love with me”