WRITING OBSTACLE

Write a descriptive scene in a world where rainbows appear at night.

Because Of You

It’s the darkest time of day

The sky is pitch black

Covered in tiny dimonds


I sit alone

Like always

Wondering, hoping

Does he feel the same?


It’s killing me

The thoughts

The worries

Why can’t I just know?

Why can’t the universe open itself and show me

I want you. I really really want you


I want to see your eyes

Your smile

Your face

I want to hold you in your hardest times

I want to celebrate in your best


I just want to be there

A piece of your life


I don’t care how big a part I am

I just want to be in it


I’d give anything

I’d do anything


God, I’d make a rainbow shine in the middle of blackness

I’d make impossible, possible

Because of you

I’d do it all

Whatever you want

Anything


I swear if it would make you happy

If it would do anything for you


I’d make colors shine in the midst of the darkness

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You are really good 👏🏻

Awww thank you so much Shadow mind!! This made my day!!! I hope you’re doing good!😊❤️🫂

Okay 1. Yayyy it always makes me so happy to read your posts. You’re an amazing writer, for both stories and poems. Don’t ever forget, and don’t ever stop writing (I mean, life your life how you want but you know what I mean). I really enjoyed reading this, I loved the metaphors you used about colors and turning something impossible into something possible.

2. I relate to this, there’s this guy I like but we’ve literally never had an interaction before, we had an assembly the other day and he was sitting in front of me and I wasn’t paying attention at all, just staring at the back of his head wondering “Do you know I exist? If someone showed you a picture of me, would you recognize that you’ve seen my face before?” Lol it’s a sad life😭

And 3. Have you tried saying this stuff to him? It might be that you’re confusing him as much as he’s confusing you. Because if he knows how you feel and is intentionally doing this, he needs some sense knocked into him (I did karate for a year when I was little…. no threats, I’m just saying🤷‍♀️). Because you are so sweet and kind, and you can light up someone’s entire day with a single sentence. I have no doubt that you really can make colors shine in the dark🫶🫶🫶❤️❤️❤️

Okay that is a VERY long comment, I apologize🤣

Thank you so so much!! This just made me cry!! (Happy cry!!)

I just need this. A good friend who I can trust, I’ve been gone so long I didn’t even realize how badly I need our friendship!❤️

And that guy better know who you are. I mean he’d be crazy not to. You’re so amazing and just indescribable! (In the best way!)

And I think if you get the chance you should go talk to him. Say hi. I bet it’d be the best day of his life and he wouldn’t even know it. I totally think you got this. (And the assembly thing….i do that too….except at football games. He invited me to his games and I never really paid attention to the game….just him. I even figured out his number when he was on the field and I was on the bleachers. Like I don’t know how but I did.)

But yeah you should totally give it a go! You got this 100%!!! (And I don’t know karate but if he didn’t know what he was missing. I could find some way to show him…)

But again you totally got this!!!❤️❤️❤️❤️🫂

Anyone know how to go from strangers to friends to together? Thanks

I wish!!😂😔 You got this though!❤️❤️

Bro. Read. My. Mind. Like me today fr. I have no idea where I stand but I just love them outside of their knowledge

i’ve missed your poems so much this was so good!! i feel this, it’s so hard to like someone but not know if they like you, and mixed signals are the worst haha.

but i mean, who wouldn’t like you?! you’re so sweet and awesome!!! seriously!! you deserve the perfect guy! ❤️

Awwww! That’s so sweet! I’ve missed writing here. And I’m so sorry I haven’t been able to catch up with your writings! I’m definitely going to I miss them so much!! This comment made me happy! I always feel alone and then I read things from my daily prompt friends and everything feels okay again!! And the same goes for you! You deserve the guy so perfect that the word perfect doesn’t even describe him!! You deserve it all!!❤️❤️❤️❤️😁😊🫂