WRITING OBSTACLE

Submitted by G. N. Solomon

Write a story, poem, or descriptive paragraph centred around glass breaking.

Make sure to think about all the sensory details, metaphors, and analogies associated with breaking glass.

All is a Lie

The vase has broken

The glass is shattered

A bat in my hand

But it’s no match for the dagger you hold

In your hand, poised above my heart

Point down, handle above

As I lie still on the ground

Any wrong move, & I’m dead


Trust is broken

Friendship lost

Whatever existed

Is now long gone

The support & belief I had in you

It almost feels like it never existed

Actually; no, it feels worse

Like you have no belief in me


Like everything was a lie & I just couldn’t see

Do you know how hard it is to trust someone when everything you thought you knew turns out to be built on a lie?

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