This is a rewrite of my first ever poem on this app, it has been almost 2 years, omg, so you don’t have to scroll if you want to read it, Inhave it bookmarked.

My life without you,

Would consist only of misery

And long days of torture

I struggle to find words

To explain how agonizing it would be

Though I seem to have words

spewing from my mouth

To tell you all about

What exactly would happen to me

What exactly would happen

If my life was free of your presence

I would stare at my ceiling

Or up to the stars

crying and asking where you are

I would leave school behind

Let my grades slide

For why would that matter,

In such a dire time?

It would cosume me

Forcing me to starve

For my body would not handle something like food

In a time where I am lacking of you

I do feel as if, my soul may evaporate

And I do not know if I would never stop screaming or if sound would cease to be produced

Awake with the sun and the moon

As the stars attempt to sing lullabies

I pry my eyes open

And cry out in agony

Because who am I

I would hide inside

Who wants to see a hideous creature

Trying to solve a true crime

Who cried so much

Her lungs gave out

She seemingly is forced to mine

All my plants would shrivel up and die

And as it seems, so would I

I can’t continue this speech

For living without you As I have said

Appears to make me screech

So I will stop my talk by saying

Existing in this universe

would be agonizingly

hard without you

So who wrote it better? 2023 Muse or 2025 Muse?