STORY STARTER
Submitted by Quill To Page
'Words are wasted on those who do not listen.'
Write a story based on or including this phrase.
She Spoke In Smoke
She told them.
Not in shouts,
but in pauses—
those long, trembling silences
that hung like laundry in the cold.
She spoke in bruises shaped like continents,
in sweaters worn through July,
in the way she flinched when cutlery clinked.
Her voice didn’t always need sound.
But it needed listening.
He was charming in crowds—
the kind who said “She’s lucky to have me”
with a laugh
sharp enough to draw blood
and no one noticed.
She said,
“I’m tired,”
but they heard
“She’s dramatic.”
She said,
“I’m scared,”
but they offered
sleep advice
and stronger coffee.
Words became feathers,
falling into the ocean
of a world not made to catch them.
And still, she scattered them—
in text messages deleted,
in apologies she never owed,
in goodbyes rehearsed
into bathroom mirrors.
He never needed to listen.
He just needed silence.
And silence, like mold, grew.
Then, the day the sirens came,
they said:
“She should have told someone.”
But she had.
Again and again,
in every language pain speaks—
fear, fatigue, change in tone,
repeated excuses,
the way she never stayed long at family dinners.
She died a little
each time her words fell to deaf hearts.
Until one day,
she died entirely.
Now they listen
to the police report,
to the funeral hymns,
to the soft sobbing of her mother in the front pew.
But it’s too late
to hear what she said
when she still had a voice.