STORY STARTER

Submitted by HardCoreWriter

Write a story about a character slowly getting closer and closer to evil.

Try to show the change through their actions and words instead of stating it outright.

The Parasite

Poetry

(Another one I wrote around half a year ago. + a rewrite I’m doing now. Went through an old notebook recently.)

Theres something

Inside of me

Tearing me apart

From the inside

Turning my insides

Into mush

And consuming them.

I think it might

**Me.**

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Rewrite:

There is something

Crawling inside of me

I can feel it writhing

Under my skin

Tearing me apart

From my own heart

Turning my insides

Into useless mush

And consuming them

Leaving nothing left

Until I am an empty husk.

I think,

It might,

**Me.**

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Comments 3

Lysalei💖

15 days ago

Okay so they’re both really, really good. I love both of them and have no negative feedback at all. Buuuuut, while my English teacher would like the second one, I kind of like the original best. It’s short and sweet (not really but that’s the phrase haha) so it really hits hard. But I really like the second one too, it’s got more detail and I can picture it better. But I’m rereading and I really like them both, idk which one I like better😂 They’re both really good!🫶

Skye Wander

16 days ago

Thanks for reading! Tell me which one you guys like more

Skye Wander

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