I got a advice a while ago on a poem of mine

I asked for feedback, and they gave it to me;

They told me to get away from the rhyming scheme.

So with this advice in mind, I write this poem

Of course I’ll still add a rhyme or two;

Just to make it fun for you,

But I’m not Dr. Seuss.

I’m simply just someone who likes to write

Who now just realized

It’s bad to rhyme too many times....

*Slam* I closed my car’s door when I got out, I started walking towards her. She was on the front of her car, one leg close to her, the other stretched out. Her arms support her as she admires the sunset, while I admire her.

“

!” I called out her name, she looks back and smiles,

“Hey

, you wanted to see me?” Her voice is soothing, I’m entranced by her beauty. As if she was a siren, but d...

Fire on fire

Causes chaos;

An Inferno.

Negative with negative

Makes a positive;

An answer.

I wondered in the beginning that since

We’re both “toxic”

What does that equal?

I figured since people said love

Includes taking risks;

Just like in business

It can succeed

If we kept trying.

So how come, no matter how hard we tried

We did more harm than good.

It doesn’t make sense how much I want you

Even...

Since I was thirteen;

I always wanted money.

The idea of being rich

Was my greatest fantasy.

Now I’m living my dream,

Big house

Big yard

But no family.

I am alone in my dream.

I thought having lots of money

was all I wanted.

That being rich,

was better than being poor?

So why do I sit at the end of the dock

And think “I still want more.”

I could blame it on my human nature;

Say “oh it’s just one o...

A few days ago I asked for feedback

On a poem of mine.

So I received an advice;

I rhymed too much,

Such a fine poem though.

It’s ironic that this prompt is about Rhyming.

But even though I have to rhyme

It still sounds weird when I do it all the time.

A few days ago I gave some feedback

On a poem I read

So here’s what I said;

“The poem is fine

There’s just too much rhymes”

Something along those l...

I don’t want to leave;

The thought of walking away,

Leaving you astray

Believe me; I want to stay.

But I can’t

It’s for our own good;

So after this dance

I have to go

Before I change my mind

Being stuck in your trance.

Please understand;

I didn’t want it to go this way.

I’m wielding a blade and

I can’t protect you with this weapon

The only shield I can give you;

Is that I walk away.

So let’s tak...

Everyday is the same

I do the work

I get the pay

Then I wait

For the end of my days;

But lets say my “end” came

Would I be okay?

My final thoughts would be regrets

Of things I didn’t change.

This is my car, why aren’t I driving it?

Why aren’t I guiding it?

That changes today,

Although I say that everyday;

This time is different, for I had learn something different.

If I do not know how to guide

...

Life is full of insipid-

A dull feeling.

A state of nothing

But that’s something isn’t it?

I’m not whole, I’m missing a piece.

The piece you stole from me;

Pulled the sheets right beneath my feet.

There is a hole inside me.

I am without you

How ironic;

I didn’t know losing someone,

Meant losing a part of you too....