Can someone please comment on how I can improve? :)

The room has so many memories. The creaky old bed she slept on, and the beautiful woven chair in the corner. There is dust on the floor, and I leave footprints as I walk around. I inhale the scent of her favorite perfume and the musty air. I wish she could be here with me. The portraits on the wall display her beautiful face, with that unforget...

I am awoken suddenly by a sound I could not quite distinguish. I have not been able to for some time now. The mysterious noise seems far away, yet so close. I cover myself with my blankets and squeak in fear. Ever since it happened, nothing has been the same. Everyday I feel like I’m being haunted by some kind of ghost or spirit. I don’t feel loved. I don’t feel accepted. Could this be the ghost o...