WRITING OBSTACLE
Inspired by Cavavaff
Write a description of a character who was raised in a city and loves busy city life.
How does this come through in their personality traits?
The Beat Between Crosswalks
Rhea Calder lived life on the second buzz of a crosswalk light. Not the first, no. That was reserved for tourists and trust-fund dreamers. But the second? That was for people like her. People who could jaywalk like choreography. Who knew which corner store sold aspirin without judging your 2 a.m. mascara tears. Who could hear the difference between an angry honk and a warning one.
She was already talking as she exited her building, bluetooth in, coffee in hand, checking her reflection in a car window without missing a step.
"Brent, don’t let the client push that launch again. Tell them June in Q3 doesn’t exist. And fix the font in Slide 12, it’s giving depressed intern.”
She didn’t wait for a reply before hanging up. She trusted Brent. He feared her just enough to be efficient.
Outside, the city greeted her like an old friend; chaotic, complicated, and never apologetic. Just how she liked her relationships. The halal cart guy, Amir, handed her a wrap without a word. She didn’t need to ask. He already knew: egg, extra hot sauce, no meat. Her mother was vegetarian, and the habit had stuck.
“You look tired, Rhea,” Amir said in his usual deadpan.
“Thanks,” she grinned. “You look like your grill cheated on you again.”
By the time she got to the office, a converted loft with too many fake plants and not enough chairs, she’d responded to six emails, three text messages, and one client who thought “circling back” was a brand strategy.
Rhea loved this. The noise, the negotiations, the people who couldn’t decide what they wanted until she told them. She was a fixer, a pusher, a connector. Need a sound engineer at 10 p.m. on a Sunday? She had one. Lost your ID in Brooklyn but needed it in a bar in Queens? Rhea had a guy.
But that morning, something was… off.
The city, usually pulsing with adrenaline, felt like it had a limp. Maybe it was the cloudy hang of summer heat, or the way the saxophonist on 14th was playing something that sounded like heartbreak. Slower than usual, like he’d lost something
And then there was the bodega.
Her bodega.
Gone.
Shuttered overnight, graffiti sprayed across the metal like a confession:
"COME HOME. I’LL FORGIVE YOU.”
She stared. Felt her stomach dip, not from hunger, but from the sudden, violent absence. The register guy, Manny, saw her and gave her a free soda without speaking. That was his language. And Rhea understood it.
By the time she got to her desk, she was ten minutes late. Unheard of. Her team raised their eyebrows.
“You okay?” Sienna asked.
“Bodega died,” Rhea muttered.
Everyone nodded solemnly. They understood. In the city, that was worse than losing a pet.
The usual rhythm: emails, campaigns, edits, deals, felt offbeat. Like her feet couldn’t find the downbeat of the day. She clicked through projects but her focus drifted. She kept hearing the saxophone. Seeing the paint. She thought about the people who passed her daily, the woman with the polka dot umbrella who always read romance novels in the rain, the teenager with the hot-pink hair who danced while waiting for the bus. Strangers, but somehow... hers. Part of the city family she’d claimed.
At lunch, she didn’t stay and order overpriced fusion tacos with the team. She walked.
No route. No plan. It felt criminal, at first. Like cheating on her calendar.
But the city rewarded her for it.
A kid offered her a sticker in Union Square. A vendor handed her a mango slice with chili powder, no charge. She passed a stoop where someone played Beyoncé on a cracked bluetooth speaker while painting their nails. The smell of hot garbage was thick, yes, but beneath it, she could smell possibility. Real life. Ungroomed and unfiltered.
By the time she hit the river, her phone buzzed again. An email. Another calendar invite.
She didn’t answer.
Instead, she sat on a bench. Unscheduled. Unproductive. Unbothered.
She watched the water, moving, always. But not in a rush. It reminded her: movement wasn’t the same as urgency. She could still love the city without trying to conquer it every damn minute.
That night, walking home under the streetlamps, she passed 14th again.
The saxophonist was still there. The song slower now. But she heard something different this time. Not grief, but longing. The kind that only lives in people who’ve stayed too long and loved too hard.
She stayed. She leaned against a pole, arms crossed, letting the music thread through her like a pulse. And when he hit a soft, aching note, she let herself smile, not with her mouth, but with her whole damn body.
Rhea Calder was city-made: fast, sharp, and always in motion. But tonight, for the first time in a long time, she let the city move around her.
And it was enough.