WRITING OBSTACLE
Broken
Lungs
Poison
Write a crime report from a fantasy world using these three words.
Done
I witnessed the cartel torturing a poor old man,
His legs were broken, he was poisoned, his lungs were punctured. I called the police on them, and the heard while I was running away and repeated “NO SNITCHES. ” and they chased me and shot at me. They hit me once and that was in my left leg just under the knee cap. They soon all got arested and sentenced to life. The old man died.
Comments 2
It is a very nice idea but I feel like you should become more descriptive of your emotions and how you physically felt after every moment. By using more upleveled language and possibly even just more description it could be an amazing piece.
