The Grass Is Red (extended version)
The sky is blue
The grass is red
He didn’t tie his shoe
So he broke his head
It stained the grass
And alas
Now the grass is red
If only someone had seen
That his laces were untied
The grass might still be green
And the boy might not have died
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Love this!! I really enjoyed the shorter version and this really completes it, great work
Thank you so much!
Wow, the rhyme and the story wow, it’s sad what happened to the boy
You know Olivia Rodrigo’s song Logical? And that one line that goes, “the sky is green, the grass is red”? It was stuck in my head and then I wrote this to get it out of my head and now I think it’s one of my best poems. Oh and thanks
Yea, I heard of it, I also made a poem based off of one her songs and you did you do the line justice
