WRITING OBSTACLE
Inspired by Rose
Describe a place of complete tranquility.
Whether this is a real location, or a fantasy scene, immerse your reader in a sense of tranquil bliss. Try to consider not just your descriptive language, but the tone and atmosphere you can portray here.
Athaiah
goodness athaiah I swear
you came from sunshine itself.
the sun chooses to touch your golden hair
in the most beautiful field of flowers it wants to shine on nothing else
and you pick a sunflower and it falls in love right then
because it heard your laughter and joined in too
but the dandelion loved you all over again
and they fought and fought over you.
but the birds heard your song and they tried to improve
their own notes to sound as sweet and true
but goodness athaiah nothing is as sweet as you.
