POEM STARTER
Start a poem with an onomatopoeia and end it with a different one.
An onomatopoeia is a word that mimics the sound of something such as bark, boom, or screech. These sounds can tell a story if used effectively!
The Tree Of Love
BOOM!
As the tree of love fell to the ground,
My heart tucked far away in my chest, nowhere to be found.
The leaves of romance and other relations
Fell
Like the land of war torn nations.
However, out of the dead, beauty can be found.
Flowers grow from the depths of the tree,
Moss covered roots whisper in glee.
The music and magic of the forest is all around,
Like a voice
An unstoppable choice.
Natures role takes a toll,
No longer is the world ruled by men,
Nature wakes us all up like the crow of a hen,
Aware of love and the change world
Opening up like one big pearl.
CRACK!
Awesome! I like the ending. You’re really cool with the beat.
Thank you so much! I truly appreciate your feedback. I’ve read some of your stuff as well and you are extremely talented! You gained a follower, can’t wait to see what you wrote next! :)
Haha, thanks. I started not long ago, not super sure about my work. But girl, sometimes you just gotta roll with it, pick it up and run!😂
I totally understand that, me too, tbh. I started maybe a week or two ago on this site, but I can already see improvement, so stick with it girl!
