STORY STARTER
Write the opening paragraphs of a story that is not set in this world.
Consider how you will let the reader know where this is set - be it overtly describing the setting, or sublty leaving clues that this world is unfamiliar.
Peace on Galdor
She loved the stars. She loved the way they shone against the ground, making dots of light. She loved the way you could see pictures of each House, exactly above the House itself.the way her House shone the brightest. She didn't always love the stars. She used to hate the way the glared into the window at night, but now sitting under the bright lights with her girlfriend, she could only imagine the pain humans must feel when their artificial light blocks such a beautiful picture in the sky. She loved the way you could see that sad sphere of land in the distance, paired with it's one moon and many stars that the don't always have the bliss of seeing. And now the calming breeze on the roof of her house gave her joy. It was all gone. All the lies, all the suffering. It was only a memory in the back of her mind. They all finally felt peace.
This is mainly about a story I thought of when I was 12 to 13. It was about three teenage girls who live in this sky place called galdor. They controlled the sky and whatnot. So these girls got into trouble (being 12 at the time, I'm pretty sure the got in trouble for a school fight lol) and so they were sent on some quest to see if rumors were true and there were still people who controlled the sea (insert: sky people vs sea people fighting over who gets to control tides) because they wanted to "make peace" with them(they didn't) so they did that whole quest and the met an awesome old guy and the redhead that they got in a fight with betrayed them and blah blah blah it was supposed to be a trilogy but I got two chapters through and gave up.
ALSO MY BDAY IS FRIDAYYYYYY (turning 14, I put it in my bio cuz I didn't want to change it on the actual day XD)