WRITING OBSTACLE
Describe a character's physical appearance through the eyes of someone who feels intense jealousy for them.
How accurate would the description be when tainted by strong emotion?
Just Jess
“Behind,” I mutter, ducking to avoid Flora’s shaker tins smacking me in the head.
“Wow, that smells amazing,” Flora says as I set the ribeye down — not in front of her, of course, but in front of the customer who’s way more interested in her neckline than the eighty-five-dollar steak I’m carrying. I sigh.
I like her. I really do. But she’s one of those people who are always nice. It’s exhausting.
Flora’s a bartender at Fosters, this upscale restaurant where I work as a food runner. I take things other people make and deliver them. Flora? She creates.
And everyone adores her — her drinks, her vibe, all of it. I get it. She’s talented. She’s passionate. She’s short, with bright curly orange hair and that magnetic, warm energy that fits perfectly into any hug. Her smile? Blinding. Effortless. No metal-mouth years like I had.
She barely wears makeup, not that she needs it. Her skin’s that glowing, poreless kind. Her lashes look like they came from a commercial. Her eyes — impossibly turquoise. And that nose? Small, with just the right hint of upturned roundness. It all fits perfectly on her stupidly adorable, heart-shaped face. She looks like she walked out of an anime.
Even when she’s not mixing a drink, she looks like a beautiful flame — always in something bold or floral or both. Her clothes wrap around her curves like they were made to. Curves men notice. A lot.
And the tattoo sleeve — a whole arm of black-and-white flowers and vines — somehow makes her look even cooler, like she’s edgy and graceful. She’s a year younger than me, but she’s been to three countries and has a boyfriend of two years.
She’s the opposite of boring.
She’s the opposite of me.