WRITING OBSTACLE

Write a dialogue scene that portrays a toxic relationship.

Never mind

[Scene: A cozy Italian restaurant. Candlelight flickers between them. The menu is thick with options, and the smell of garlic lingers in the air.]


WIFE (tilting the menu slightly toward him):

If you had to choose between the orecchiette with the sausage ragu or the spinach ravioli, which would

you—


HUSBAND (cutting her off, without looking up):

Babe, I really don’t care. You’re old enough to make your own decisions.


[A pause. The words hang for a second too long. She lowers her menu.]


WIFE (quietly):

Oh. Sorry. I didn’t mean to. . .

(she folds her hands in her lap, her voice smaller)


Never mind.


[He glances up briefly, but she’s already looking down. The waiter appears, pen poised, but the silence lingers just a moment longer.]

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