WRITING OBSTACLE

In a short scene, how can your protagonist say “I won’t forget you” without literally saying the words “I won’t forget you”?

Bedside Reminder

I couldn’t bear to be sad with grandma. She always hated garish sentiment.


But these were her last hours and I needed her to know what she had meant to me.


As I sat with her, holding her hand, eyes barely open, the sheet over her chest still moving, I took the old book out of my purse and held it up to her.


The book she had read to me over and over when I was a child. “The Dragon and His Blue Sportcoat.”


I tapped a finger on the book cover. Then I pointed the same finger over my heart.


A tear sprung from her eye and she smiled.

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