WRITING OBSTACLE

Introduce two characters in a scene who are complete opposites, and highlight their differences through dialogue and actions.

They Weren’t Filled With Rage

(Very basic but whatevs)


I walked past this man and accidentally bumped into him,


“What’s wrong with you!?” He stared at me with dagger sharp blue eyes. His hair looked ruffled. Like he’d just left a fight.


The man dusted himself off.


“I’m sorry,” I said softly.


“Yeah well you should be! What if I had an injury where you hit me!?”


“Did you have an injury where I hit you?” I asked looking him up and down. He was wearing light blue jeans and an oversized red t-shirt. He had on scruffed up black and white converse.


“No! But I could have!” He stepped hard on the floor. “I could call this assault!”


When I looked to his eyes again they weren’t filled with rage. They looked like they were filled with- I couldn’t tell.


“Once again I’m sorry I didn’t mean to bump into you.”


“Yeah they all say they’re sorry. But they never really are, are they?”


I could tell now. Sadness.


“Are you okay?” I asked taking a step toward him.


“No.” He said quietly. He took a step back.


“You can talk about it.”


And so he did. He talks about his life and what was biting at him.


He thanked me and walked off.

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