WRITING OBSTACLE

If there was an 8th deadly sin, what would it be?

Write a descriptive paragraph about this sin.

Eighth Deadly Sin 

All living things have hearts.All living creatures with a heartbeat are gods creations!

Let’s talk about domestic animals, such as dogs,and cats!

All they want is to be loved by their owners!

I saw something horrific, as I was walking down the street one day. It was a beautiful sunny day, not a cloud in the sky.So, I decided to take a little stroll.I saw a man walking his little dog. This man continuously,kept on dragging the dog,by the leash!The little black and white puppy was petrified of his owner. His tail was down,I heard whimpering from the pup!

I stopped dead in my tracks.I was observing intensely.What was this owner was going to do next? He was a large man, scruffy looking with gray hair. He must have weighed over 200 pounds, and shirtless! I could see his belly overlapping on his jeans!


He kicked the dog about three times, with his shoe. His feet looked tremendous .The pain must have been excruciating. Heard the dog, crying and yelping with pain!

The man was yelling at the dog!!Listen to me,or else, I’m gonna do it again! Im going to kick your butt until you squeal!


I immediately went home and called the police. I told the police,what was happening with the dog!

The police said,there’s nothing they can do. Animals are not considered people. They are just a piece of property. Like a chair or a lamp!


I feel that this is the eighth deadly sin!.Oh my god, how could anyone be so cruel, to a helpless animal. All animals need,is a little affection and lots of love!They are included as a family member. You love them unconditionally. Love them to death!!! They are your friend, companion with a whole bunch of love to give you!

Animals are God‘s creation!My heart, tells me CRUELTY to ANIMALS should be included with pride, greed, lust,

envy, gluttony, wrath and slough. The word of the day is: if you don’t like animals, don’t buy one!

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