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âOnce the flowers bloom, weâll be doomed.â
Include this line of speech in a story.
The Blooming
I first heard the phrase when I was seven years old, sitting on the cracked porch of my grandmotherâs old farmhouse, staring out at rows of withered fields that never seemed to yield more than sorrow. My cousin Lila, all knees and elbows and sunburned freckles, leaned close to whisper in my ear.
âOnce the flowers bloom, weâll be doomed.â
She said it like it was a secret. Or maybe a threat.
Either way, it wormed into my brain and never left.
**1. The Town of Witherford**
Witherford is the kind of place that clings to your skin long after you leave. The roads crack and buckle under relentless frost heaves, houses lean like drunks caught in mid-stumble, and the people⊠well, they keep to themselves. Always have.
When I returned at twenty-seven, after nearly a decade away, nothing had changed. The same splintered sign at the townâs edge. The same smattering of sagging homes wrapped in rusted fences. And the same smell: damp earth and something faintly sweet, like rotting fruit.
Iâd come back because Grandma had died, leaving me the house. It wasnât grief that brought me â truth be told, I barely remembered her face. It was more the pull of unfinished business, a chance to untangle whatever tethers still bound me to this rotting corner of the world.
The townsfolk didnât greet me when I arrived. They watched from behind lace curtains and dirty shop windows. Eyes following me. Judging. Maybe warning.
**2. The Black Diary**
Grandmaâs house was worse off than I remembered. Shingles missing like bad teeth, ivy strangling the porch posts, and inside â mildew eating at the wallpaper, the air thick with mold and age.
I spent the first night on a sagging couch, surrounded by boxes of yellowed papers and moth-eaten quilts. Thatâs when I found it.
Tucked beneath loose floorboards in her bedroom was a small black diary. Its leather cracked and flaking, the lock rusted away. Inside were pages and pages of tight, frantic script. Most made little sense, but certain lines jumped out, written over and over again like a chant:
âThey come when the flowers bloom.
Once the flowers bloom, weâll be doomed.
Keep the lanterns burning. Keep the blood warm.â
I didnât sleep much after that.
**3. The Fields Awake**
On the third morning, I woke to the strangest sight: Grandmaâs fields â long dead as far back as I could remember â were covered in tiny green shoots. Thousands of them. Sprouting overnight, reaching greedily for the sun.
I stood barefoot on the porch, breath fogging in the chill, and felt my stomach knot. Something about them was wrong. The way they swayed, not quite in sync with the breeze, like listening to a song in a language I couldnât understand.
At the edge of the yard, I spotted old Mrs. Grable, stooped and shriveled, her milky eyes locked on me. She raised a trembling hand and pointed toward the field.
âItâs starting,â she croaked. âBest get ready, dearie.â
Then she shuffled off, muttering prayers under her breath.
**4. Night Whispers**
That night, the house groaned with restless voices. I told myself it was just the wind, but deep down I knew better. I could hear them â faint, breathless whispers seeping through the walls, under the door, curling around my bed like cold fingers.
âOnce the flowers bloomâŠ
Once the flowers bloomâŠâ
At some dark hour I must have drifted off, because I woke to a soft tapping at the window. Half-dreaming, I stumbled over and drew back the curtain.
Outside, the field was ablaze with color. Flowers. Hundreds â thousands â of them. Unfurling black and crimson petals that glistened with something thicker than dew.
My breath caught. They werenât swaying anymore. They were twisting, as if watching me.
And at the edge of the field stood a figure. Tall, impossibly thin, skin the pallor of grave wax. Its eyes gleamed like oil lamps. When it smiled, its mouth split too wide, rows of needle teeth glinting.
It raised a finger to its lips.
Shhh.
**5. The Lantern Procession**
The next day, I went into town. I needed answers, damn it. But people wouldnât meet my eye. They clutched children closer, crossed the street to avoid me. It wasnât until I caught sight of Lila, older now, sharp-eyed and wary, that someone finally spoke.
We ducked into the shadow of the old hardware store.
âWhy didnât you stay gone?â she hissed.
âBecause I needed to settle Grandmaâs affairs. Whatâs going on with the fields, Lila? What are those flowers?â
Her face crumpled. âThe same as always. They come every twenty years. Grandma was one of the Keepers. Your mama shouldâve been, but she ran off â left us with the debt. Now itâs your turn.â
âDebt? What the hell are you talking about?â
She leaned closer, voice trembling. âItâs the Blooming. They come to collect. Thatâs why we keep the lanterns burning all night, why we offer blood. Small sacrifices to keep them from taking everyone.â
My mouth went dry. âAnd if we donât?â
She looked past me, toward the horizon. âThen theyâll feast. On us.â
**6. The Harvest Begins**
That night, lanterns glowed in every window but mine. I didnât own any, and by the time I thought to borrow one, it was too late.
Outside, the flowers shivered, releasing clouds of dark pollen that curled through the air like smoke. I watched in horror as shapes emerged â tall, gaunt things with too-long arms and faces smooth and featureless, save for wet, gaping maws.
They moved from house to house. Where lanterns burned, they paused, sniffed the air, then moved on. But at the edge of town, I saw one unlucky home whose light had sputtered out. The things poured inside, and screams tore through the quiet night.
I stumbled back from the window, bile rising in my throat.
Thatâs when I felt a hot breath on my neck.
âOnce the flowers bloom, weâll be doomed.â
I spun around â no one there. Just the whisper still echoing in my ears.
**7. A Bargain in Blood**
I ran to the attic, digging through trunks until I found an old hurricane lantern. My hands shook as I lit it. The flame wavered weakly, barely a glow. I huddled there on the floor, clutching it like a talisman, listening to the things moving outside.
Then the voices came again. Not whispers now, but chanting, hollow and hungry.
âBlood for bloom, blood for bloomâŠâ
A bloom of darkness spread across the ceiling. I watched, transfixed, as long shadow fingers stretched down the walls, reaching for me. The lantern sputtered. The air thickened, syrupy and cold.
Desperate, I did the only thing I could think of â I sliced open my palm with Grandmaâs old kitchen knife, letting blood spill onto the attic floor.
The shadows hesitated. Then they receded, curling back up into the beams.
**8. The Price Revealed**
Dawn came sluggish and gray. I staggered outside, palm bandaged, the lantern still clutched in my other hand.
All around me, the town was silent. Too silent. Doors ajar, windows shattered. Blood stained the doorsteps of at least half the homes I passed. I saw Mrs. Grableâs nightgown trailing from her porch, torn and soaked red.
Lila found me at the edge of the field. Her face was hard, eyes rimmed with tears.
âYou paid your part, didnât you?â
âI⊠I think so.â
She nodded. âGood. Itâs always blood. Always been blood. Keeps them from taking more.â
âWhat happens now?â
She looked out over the flowers, already wilting under the morning sun. âNow we clean up. We bury the bodies. And we wait another twenty years.â
**9. The Last Entry**
That night, I sat at Grandmaâs kitchen table, her black diary open before me. I flipped to the last page, one I hadnât seen before. A fresh entry, scrawled in ink that was still tacky under my fingers.
âIf youâre reading this, child, it means the Blooming has come again.
We made our bargain long before you were born â to spare the many, the few must bleed. The flowers feed them, the blood feeds the flowers. Without the offering, all would perish.
You carry this burden now. Keep the lanterns burning. Keep the blood warm.
Or all will be lost.â
A soft laugh bubbled up my throat. Bitter, broken. Because now I understood. Witherford wasnât just cursed â it was complicit. We all were. Generations paying a debt we could never clear.
**10. The Cycle Continues**
I tried to leave the next morning. Packed up my car, drove down the cracked road toward the highway. But somewhere past the last mailbox, I found myself right back at Grandmaâs driveway.
Tried again. And again.
By dusk, I realized I couldnât leave. Not ever. The Blooming had bound me here, same as it had bound Grandma, and her mother before her. A living tithe.
So I returned to the house, lit every lantern I could find, and waited for the next bloom. Because thatâs all there was left to do.
**11. Epilogue: Twenty Years Later**
They say if you stand at the edge of Witherfordâs fields on a moonless night, you can hear the flowers sighing, calling for the blood theyâre owed.
I know because I stand there often now, lantern in hand, whispering the same old warnings to the children clutching my skirts.
âOnce the flowers bloom, weâll be doomed.â
Their eyes widen, tiny mouths forming frightened Oâs.
Good. Let them be afraid. Let them remember. Because fear keeps the lanterns burning. And as long as the lanterns burn, maybe â just maybe â weâll last another season.
But deep down, I know the truth.
Nothing keeps them at bay forever.
**~ THE END ~**