WRITING OBSTACLE
Write a story with a non-chronological narrative that takes place at a wedding.
It can be in any genre, as long as the storyline is told out of chronological order. What can this add to the narrative?
The Wedding Guest
Isabelle stood beneath the archway woven with eucalyptus and jasmine. The late afternoon sun filtered through the leaves, casting shifting patterns of gold across the garden lawn. Her hands trembled slightly around the wildflower bouquet she had picked herself that very morning. The scent of jasmine mingled with the warmth in the air, yet inside her, a cold knot twisted tight in her chest.
Across the lawn, Julian waited at the altar, his eyes bright with hope and love. When he saw her approach, he smiled, the kind of smile that made Isabelle’s heart ache in a way she hadn’t expected today. Not on her wedding day.
The guests rose as soft music swelled. Cameras clicked, whispered blessings floated on the breeze. But in the third row, aisle seat, a woman in a navy-blue dress and wide-brimmed hat sat perfectly still. Tears pooled in the corners of her eyes. Her gaze was fixed on Isabelle, unwavering and full of quiet sorrow. No one else seemed to notice.
That morning, before the room filled with laughter and the hum of curling irons, Isabelle had caught her reflection in the full-length mirror. Her hair curled softly around her face; the pale fabric of her gown shimmered like a dream. Yet the reflection looked fragile, haunted.
“Do you think she’ll come?” Isabelle whispered to her mother.
Her mother froze, the pin in her hand halted mid-air. Her eyes darkened with something unsaid. “She wasn’t invited.”
Isabelle swallowed hard, throat tight. “I know. But I can’t stop hoping.”
Her mother looked away, the silence between them thickening like fog.
Earlier that morning, before the first guests arrived, Isabelle slipped away to the bridal suite. From deep inside her overnight bag, she pulled out a small velvet box she’d hidden weeks ago. Inside lay an old silver locket, worn smooth with age, and beneath it, a folded note written on faded hotel stationery.
Don’t worry. I’ll keep my distance. But I had to see you one last time.
Love always, E.
Isabelle’s fingers trembled as she closed the box. A cold shiver ran down her spine.
Eleanor. The name was a ghost she could never outrun.
The ceremony flowed like a beautiful melody. Vows exchanged. Rings slipped onto fingers. Promises sealed beneath a sky blushed with late afternoon light. The crowd erupted into applause as bride and groom kissed.
But the woman in navy remained seated, silent, still, her gaze locked on Isabelle alone.
At the reception, the best man’s speech stumbled awkwardly through flat jokes. The maid of honour’s voice broke during her toast. Isabelle smiled through it all, lifting her glass in practiced grace, but her eyes kept returning to the shadowed corner where the woman in navy sat alone.
She did not laugh. Did not dance. She only watched.
And in that watchfulness was a grief so raw it seemed to tear at Isabelle’s chest.
A sudden tightness coiled in her throat, sharp and unyielding.
The woman’s lips moved silently: You promised.
The words were fragile and broken, swallowed by murmurs and clinking glasses.
That morning, just before dawn, Isabelle had stood barefoot on the balcony, wrapped in a thin shawl, staring out at the endless sky.
“I dreamed about her again,” she said quietly, voice nearly lost in the cold air.
Her mother stirred beside her, coffee warm in her hands. “She’s not your burden anymore.”
Isabelle’s breath caught. “But she’s gone.”
Her mother said nothing. In that silence lived a thousand things never to be said again.
Later, beneath strings of twinkling fairy lights, Julian took Isabelle’s hands and spun her into laughter. The guests cheered, faces glowing in golden haze.
The woman in navy stood at the edge of the dance floor, where the music softened into a hum.
Isabelle caught her gaze for a brief moment, a raw, electric flash of something too painful for words.
Their eyes locked, and for a heartbeat, time shattered.
Isabelle’s smile faltered. Her chest tightened again.
Then Julian pulled her close, and the moment slipped away like smoke.
When she blinked, the woman in navy had vanished.
At the buffet, the woman in navy moved quietly among clusters of guests, slipping past conversations without a sound.
No one saw her. No one reached out.
She was a soft wind passing unnoticed through a room filled with noise.
Only a small boy spotted her, blue eyes wide with wonder. Tugging his mother’s sleeve, he whispered, “Mom, is that…?”
She smiled and pressed a finger to her lips.
The boy nodded, eyes shining with secret understanding, and hurried away.
As the sun dipped below the horizon, guests gathered to ring tiny silver bells and blow bubbles into the cooling air.
Isabelle and Julian ran hand in hand toward the waiting vintage car, their laughter bright and certain.
From the steps of the hall, in her navy blue dress, and wide-brimmed hat, she watched on.
Her smile was soft, edged with sorrow, and something like forgiveness.
She did not call out. Did not follow.
She simply faded like jasmine-scented wind drifting through leaves.
And as the bells rang on, Isabelle knew some love doesn’t end with a kiss. Some live quietly, in shadows and memories, waiting to be remembered.
In the days to follow, as photos and videos of the day flitted through messages and emails, there was no sign of the woman in navy, no wide-brimmed hat, no solitary figure in the third-row aisle.
But the printed seating chart told the truth:
Reserved in Loving Memory of Eleanor Gray.
A small golden-edged frame held a smiling photograph of a young woman with dark auburn hair, dressed in navy blue and wearing a wide-brimmed hat. In the picture, Eleanor had her arm gently draped around a blonde, blue-eyed Isabelle, both of them proudly showing their rings to the camera, their faces close as they shared a tender, stolen kiss.
Isabelle’s fingers trembled as she played the last voicemail from Eleanor. Her voice, fragile and raw, whispered through the quiet room:
“I’ll always love you. No matter what. I promise.”
The words hung in the air, heavy with heartbreak. With a slow, aching breath, Isabelle pressed delete.
And yet, every night after, Eleanor’s voice returned, haunting her dreams, refusing to be forgotten.