WRITING OBSTACLE

Create a paragraph conjuring the intensity of love at first sight.

Use descriptive language like hyperbole and metaphors to convey the connection, and awe of this moment (whether or not you believe in such events)!

Across The Room

Across the room i see you

You are in a blue sweater

And jeans

You are tall

With creamy brown hair

Your eyes are bright blue

Like the sky

I want those eyes on me

You are laughing with your friend

It stands out in all the hubbub

It’s a nice sound

Sweet and happy

Your gaze flicks to me

A glance turns into a stare

Your laugh dies

It’s replaced with a curious smile

I smile back


We are meeting again

This time outside

Again there are many people

This time I’m in all white

There are people on either side of an aisle

I am walking down it

I know that faces of my loved ones are nearby

But I keep looking at you

You are in a black suit

With a black tie

Your hair is messy

Like you’ve nervously been running your hands through it

Your eyes are fixed on me

You mouth is smiling

I smile back

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