WRITING OBSTACLE

Write a poem about the sea that does not use the words

Deep,

Blue,

Shimmering,

Cold.

Synonyms and creativity will help you find ways to convey the enormousness and beauty of the ocean without using these common descriptors.

Ocean

Mighty ocean ever rolling heaves her salty breast,

perpetual rolling ocean tides that swell from creat to crest.


She breaks upon her sandy shores

ferrying the breeze,

refreshing draughts of cooling wind that rustles in the leaves.


Mounting, breaking, crashing o’er,

her power she displays,

while I upon her bank reside,

am awed beneath her misty spays.


Mighty ocean ever rolling

from start untill eternity,

will ever thrill the hearts of man

while pondering the sea.

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