STORY STARTER
Submitted by LunatheWitch
I woke up to hear knocking on glass. At first I thought it came from window, then I realized it was coming from the mirror...
Write a horror story that includes this premise.
Left Behind
As I was trying to sleep under my blanket, so warm and sleek
I suddenly heard a knock
I got up and wanted to take a peek
Whatever caused my shock
I got out of my bed
Walked over to where my window was
I was still tired so I rubbed my head
I assumed someone was throwing rocks at the window because
My friends have done this before
So they could have my attention
They haven’t broken the window but I think they shouldn’t do it anymore
If they break my window, it’ll be worse than going to detention
I grabbed my covers, grabbed them hard
Moved them to the side
To see my friends, Carl and Gard
But they weren’t there, they didn’t even hide
They just weren’t there, not even a little
And nothing was knocking on my window
It made me feel tricked, made me feel awful
Until what do I know?
I keep hearing knocking
Hitting against some glass loudly
I closed my covers and was looking
All around my room to even just slightly see
Who or what is causing all that ruckus
I then stopped moving my head
Staring at the cracked mirror, looking listless
Looking like I had to sleep and go to bed
I walked up to the cracked mirror
I noticed that the banging halted
As I got nearer
I started to breathe heavily, and as he did
He heard someone breathing heavier
As I got up close to the mirror, I saw my reflection
I kept hearing the breathing and it got louder
Moreover, the light projection
In my room, from my lamp
To the one in my closet
To the one next to the door that’s shaped like a tent in a camp
All of the light in my room, all of it
Started flickering
Off and on, off and on
It kept going and going
It got more intense as control of the room was gone
I stared at the cracked mirror
Then as the lights flickered quicker
I saw her
Staring at me, looking much grosser and deader
She told me that her name was Jenny
How she died in this house in June of 1897
When she tripped and busted her head, blood came out freely
On this mirror, making it cracked and her spirit stuck in
This cracked, old mirror in my room in this house
She told me that when I moved in
With my family, my dad and his spouse
She thought I was cuter than a Bobby pin
She wanted me to know her by hitting the glass on the cracked mirror
She’s done that for years, the miss
Yet I always tuned her out and never saw her
And I’ve never noticed her until now with this
She said she felt very lonely and ignored by me
She said with bitter aggression
But afterwards, she said this with a bit of glee
“Oh, well, at least I won’t be lonely anymore with this possession”
I was confused and scared by this thing
And so, I closed my eyes, hoping this would end
I heard no more breathing, no more lights flickering
I opened my eyes, and they got big and widened
I looked around more perturbed
As I saw nothing but darkness around me
I was quite disturbed
I saw the girl again, looking much more lively
She looked like a beautiful young girl
When I was looking at the cracked mirror
The type I would wanna see twirl
But I was still mad when I looked at her
She just looked at me
With a big smile on her face, she went through her hair
I hit the glass, banged on it intensely
She did not care
It was like she didn’t know that I existed
She stopped looking at the mirror and walked away
This was all so twisted
I begged her to explain what happened, to stay
But she just ignored me
And kept walking away
Until she stopped suddenly
And looked back to say
“It hurts to be ignored completely
To be left behind”
She said, raising her eyebrows and smiling deviously
Turning around and continuing to smile, being so unkind
Then I saw her slowly fading on this day
She also wanted to give me a gesture with her hand
But it was too late for her to flip me off as she went away
I stood there, struggling to understand
What just happened to me
Could I get out of here?
Could I ever be free?
Honestly, probably no, which is what I fear