WRITING OBSTACLE

Submitted by Frankie Famighetti

Create a conversation that takes place within a human body.

It can be between cells, organs, or anything real or imagined within the body.

The Stubborn Leg

One crisp morning, as the sun began to rise over the horizon, Xavier thought it would be a delightful idea to embark on a brisk walk around town. He stepped outside, the cool air refreshing against his skin, yet he could feel the telltale ache in his legs from the previous day's exertions. However, an unexpected internal debate had begun inside his body—a strange war of wills.


As he walked down the familiar streets, Xavier felt something unusual stir within him. A disembodied voice broke the silence, emanating from his weary thigh. “I am so tired,” it lamented. He froze, disbelief coursing through him; his thigh had just communicated. Shaking his head in confusion, he pressed forward, dismissing it as a figment of his overactive imagination.


“Can we stop? I am so tired…” the voice pleaded again, more insistent this time.


With an exasperated sigh, Xavier replied, “No, we are not stopping. I’m not even sure you’re real. You’re just a trick of my mind, a side effect of fatigue."


Suddenly, a sharp pang shot through his thigh, causing him to wince. “What was that for?” he exclaimed, a mix of surprise and irritation in his tone. The voice responded defiantly, “I can hear you, you know. We are going to stop. You can’t make me carry on like this!”


Light laughter bubbled up from somewhere deep inside him. “I’m the one in control of this body,” he said confidently, trying to assert his dominance over his physical state. “So, thank you, but we’ll continue this walk.”


With each step, he felt the momentum build inside him, ready to push past the exhaustion, reaffirming his determination to conquer the streets ahead and the internal struggles within.

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