WRITING OBSTACLE

Describe an irrational tantrum of a child as if it were an important and meaningful artistic performance.

What important or humorous meaning might this behaviour portray in your commentary?

McDonald’s

Scene 1!

“Come on Suzanne, we have to leave now.” The tired mother said.

“NOOOOOOO!!!!! I want the huge lolipop” The girl, seemingly no more than 3 years old, wailed, sitting on the floor.

WOW! She’s a mini Martin Luther King Jr.! She believes in peaceful protesting!!!

She stuck her lip out dramatically and glared up at her mother, curly chestnut pigtails bouncing.

“Let’s goooooo, your brother is coming home soon.” He mom said, picking her up, “He’s goin got get lost walking home!”

“GOOD! I never liked him anyway.” she said with a smug little grin.

Hmm, sassy actor… oh well, makes the plot intriguing!!! Her mother gives her the BOMBASTIC SIDE EYE and dragged her out of the shop. I creepily follow them. A few steps later, she escapes her tired-now-pissed-mother and runs into the Build-A-Bear. It’s one of those special huge ones, so I know this one will be good.

Scene 2!

She hides behind the largest stuffie, which is a Cinnamoroll plush. I look at the price tag VERY nonchalantly. $250? I’m sorry, $250?!?!?! That’s crazy!!!

“SUZANNE!!!” Her mother shouted angrily, “FOR THE LAST TIME, LET’S GO.”

“Ma’am, I’m going to have to ask you to leave.” Said a man in a EXTREMELY tacky uniform.

“UH, no. You need to leave or I’m going to have to call security.”

“My daughters in here.”

She was escorted out, and her daughter, assumably Suzanne smirked from behind the plush.

“Get out here, and I’ll take you to McDonald’s.” She said, rolling her eyes from outside the store. Suzanne bounded out and ran towards her mom.

“BRAVO!!!” I yelled dramatically. They turned around and looked at me like I was crazy. Oops I thought I said that ion my head. I ran away down to the tacky fountain

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