WRITING OBSTACLE

Write a description of the feeling of drifting off to sleep.

You could use metaphorical or poetic language, or you could use comparisons and contrast to describe this feeling.

Insomnia

Lately it’s been like this,

Lying on the bed

Staring into the screen

3 a.m pasts and my finger tips tapping away freely in my hand

Holding my phone and thinking of past years and moments and mistakes


I watch the clock, the minutes the hours

My alarm counts me down till when I need to be awakened for the next day


My thoughts roam freely in the night

And I enjoy writing since it’s the perfect time

But my body is getting heavier and heavier

And my eye lids get softer and softer


My breath slows down a second at a time

It becomes blurrier and blurrier

and then

My hands weaken


It gets a bit chilly so I go under the covers quickly

Put away my phone for the night

And charge it automatically into the socket without a second glance at it


I sleep awake a bit more and stare at the ceiling with eyes wide opened

And then I drift away without hesitation

Where I start dreaming until it becomes

deeper and deeper and more and more visible


Fast asleep and out like a light

To regain my strength so I can write again for the next night

And repeating it over and over the next and following days

Because the nighttime for me is where I can rejuvenate and have a fun lonely time

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