STORY STARTER
Chaotic
Write a scene where something chaotic is happening.
F’ck f’ck f’ck! Not again! I told them so. Oh, why does nobody take me serieus!?
She sits in her car. Not crying, she is not crying!
Okay, now what? Call. Again. And wait. Again.
Last time is took them two hours. Two hours to get to her. She doesn’t have two hours today. Not even one. She promised she’d be there. Again.
‘ Sorry, car wouldn’t start. Yes, Again. ‘
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Love the chaos and the panic! A couple recommendations I have:
“Serieus” should be “serious”
For the part where she is speaking, I would use these marks instead : “Sorry, the car wouldn’t start. Yes, again.”
I truly love the chaos of this. I wouldn’t change the spacing as it makes it more confusing and wild. This was fun 💛💛
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