WRITING OBSTACLE

Write a paragraph or short story from the perspective of someone who feels disappointed.

You do not have to reveal what the character is disappointed about, nor do you have to make them overtly upset, but you should focus on the small signs and behaviours that show their emotions.

Lost Key, Shattered Moments

It’s been 48 hours

I can officially say

They’ve lost my keys



Deep down I’m a tad angry,

Angry because I attached a soul to it

With me it lived

I made it live within me at least



Sadden,

Sadden to see the one thing

Related to me also leave me

can you believe me

Even materialized things leave or hide from me



Disappointed,

To see I can trust people having a hold of my personal things

It’s takes a lot…

A lot of trust…

A lot of meaning to it



It’s a funny thing that some things seem the biggest at some point

I know later on we all move on from the small moments

But while I’m still stuck on this moment

I’m saddened by it’s departure

I know later on life it will be replaced, and or moved on to someone new



While it was with me, it was loved

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