STORY STARTER

Submitted by FreeFly

โ€œI didnโ€™t think about that.โ€

โ€œYou donโ€™t think about anything.โ€

Write a story including this dialogue.

I Fell Into A Pit

โ€œI didnโ€™t think about that.โ€


โ€œYou donโ€™t think about anything.โ€


We had fallen into a pit without relising there was a pit in front of us. We had been walking, there was mist, I hadnโ€™t seen the pit and we fell in, me first.


โ€œI didnโ€™t think there were any tiger pits in these mountains, weโ€™ve been here many times to collect red rasberries and there havenโ€™t ever been any here.โ€ I corrected her to my defense.


โ€œWhatever, you still fell first, I thought you just ducked, in casethere was a branch, so I did too.โ€ She replied sassily.


โ€œLets just think about how to get out of here, we have to be home by supper and have a handful of berries, if we donโ€™t you know theyโ€™ll skin us alive.โ€


Suddenly I felt a hard kick from Stephine and I stumbled and fell, slaming hard into the wall of the pit and the breath was knocked out of me.


โ€œWhat did you do that for?โ€ I managed to wheez out


โ€œDonโ€™t remind me what theyโ€™ll do, I already know, I watched it happen before.โ€


โ€œI was exagerrating!โ€


โ€œLast time someone returned, they were brought to the office andโ€ฆโ€


She shuddered.


โ€œWhat?โ€


โ€œI canโ€™t say, Iโ€™l stay awake for weeks, even when I was so tired I could barely put one foot in front of the other, I couldnโ€™t fall asleep.โ€


Just then something fell from the pit and that was the last thing I saw.

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