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Writing Prompt

WRITING OBSTACLE

Write a paragraph about a first date, where you include an adverb in every sentence.

Adverbs describe verbs (eg quickly, quietly, excitedly). Try to fit them into your sentences alongside appropriate verbs, so the adverbs don't feel forced.

Writings

Meeting My Husband

So I would go to school every day . As I get off the bus every day I would excidety walk up to the building I lived .. Because I could see my husband at the building he was a maintenance guy there . I one day quietly told him one day to come to my apartment so we could kiss .. September 1989 Him and I started dating October 1989 ....

august 2020

He knocked on my door politely when he arrived. Ii opened it nervously; not sure what to expect. As soon as I saw his smile and youthfully bright eyes, I knew I made the right decision inviting him in. He spent hours listening to me attentively as I told stories you shouldn’t tell on a first date. Surprisingly, when I said goodbye to him the next morning, he agreed to see me again....

Definitely

ā€œAre you so very nervous as I am?ā€


ā€œNot hardly. After all, you’re the one who quietly passes my desk every day. You’re the one who absently forgets something so you can go by two or three times in just a few minutes.ā€ Brenda paused silently. ā€œYou’re definitely the oneā€¦ā€


Dominic waited anxiously for Brenda to continue. He could hardly stand it. So he continued her completely accurate indict...

FIRST DATE:Her Pov

I sat down quietly. expecting for him to never show up. That happened to often. But there he was standing by a plant almost knocking it over.I laughed anxiously. he looked at me cheerfully holding rose’s in his hands ā€˜my favorite’ I said as he walked up to the table ā€˜mine too’he whispered softly. I smiled joyfully I don’t know exactly why but it felt different he made me feel potentially happy I ...

Where Art Thou?

I sat awkwardly at the restaurant’s table.

It was valentines and everyone else had date who appeared early or on time , except for me.

I sat sadly and alone at the table as I stared at my phone. Waiting patiently for a text or a call , after all she was late.

Suddenly, an hour passed and people saw that I was upset. They tried to comfort me, I then decided to leave quickly.


I paid my bill awkwa...

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A Timeless Romance

It was finally the day of our first date, I remember how he asked me out rather excitedly. I nervously accepted as we made arrangements for dinner today. I slowly slid on my favorite dress, It was a pale pink with splashes of color from the flowers strewn about it. I diligently applied my make up as I glanced at the clock. Before I knew it his car had arrived in my driveway quickly followed by him...

2
First Impression

He watches her excitedly from across the room. Lauren is beautifully dressed in a navy and white polka dot halter dress, her bare back showing off the deep tan she has gotten from her summer in Capri. Henry is speechless as he reaches out to hug her and give her a kiss on the cheek. ā€œYou look stunning tonight,ā€ he says and she shyly replies with a ā€œthank youā€. Henry takes her hand and Lauren ...

First Date

I quickly scrambled into the house

Nervously rambling about what I got at the store

After longingly talking on the phone for months

He slowly closed the door


We passionately kissed, It felt surprisingly natural

After virtually bonding online

The time slowly passed, the day finally arrived

And now this love was perfectly mine...

Not Prince Charming

I waited for him to arrive anxiously. I desperately hoped it would be a good experience. It was definitely awkward and uncomfortable. I tolerated his rude behavior patiently because I really did like him, but he really didn’t seem like Prince Charming at all. The date was meeting his family, which was ok, except they seemed just as weird as he was....

Quickly

I had wanted to get his details secretly. I bravely asked him and a few collateral others to take a selfie with me. That’s when I curtly asked him out for dinner. My butterflies fluttered excitedly when he accepted. I took him out for an Asian cuisine where I went through all my life thoroughly. At this point, I hadn’t realised that I had captured his eyes irresistibly. It was getting late and he ...