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POEM STARTER

Inspired by BlueInk

"You loved me so fiercely that I burned; now, you'll only be left with ashes."

Write a poem that contains this line. You may modify it as you see fit, but the sentiment should remain similar to the original quote.

Into Ashes In Search Of Loosen Sparkles

You loved me so fiercely that I burned; now,

You'll only be left with ashes.

Don't paint me

Don’t use me

In such dull colours.

Maybe my colours are too bright for your eyes to see.Before?

Hopefully,One day

You will see me for who I am.

By then,you will see

Who actually Am’I used to be.

Unfortunately,until when it’s already been too late.!

I thought…...

Too Close

You loved me so fiercely,

That I burned

At your hand

Drawn to you

Like a moth to a flame


Ashes follow

In the wake of my absence

A fire so bright

Extinguished by misplaced passion


I put my heart in your hands

In hope that you’d keep it safe

Because I was yours

And you were mine


Now you’ll be left with pieces

Of me, tucked between the folds of life

Under your sheets, in your car, at your favori...

Love that burns

At first sight the fire in your eyes came into the light

But there was no way on any day that we could be together

Different kingdoms different worlds love would leave us with ashes

Even If it could leave you with grief secretly you stayed

Suddenly they found out and crashed it into pieces

Then we were punished so severely it left us with ashes of our love

You loved me so fiercely that I burned; ...

I just wanted to be picked

I never wanted to be loved again

All i wanted was to be picked

i wanted attention

i wanted to be seen

but never to be loved again


That doesn’t mean that i didn’t love you

i loved with every breath that i took

with every sight that my eyes witnessed

I loved you


but the love the love that you gave was unexplainable

you loved me so deeply

you loved me so hard

you loved me so intense

tha...

Ashes In Your Hands

You loved me so fiercely,

I burned.

Like a moth to a flame

Drawn in by the light and warmth

I so desperately craved


Now you’ll only be left

With ashes.

A grey dust,

Blown away with the softest whispers,

Marking your hands with the memory of me....

Burning Love

You loved.

I loved.

That's how it went.

Your love was gasoline on our fire of love.

I welcomed the pain

Until It was too much to handle.



You loved me so fiercely that I burned; nothing remained but my ashes that you were left with.


You'll never feel my fire anymore.

Our fierce love is no more.

My love died with me....

Abusive Flames

The fire ever so bright

Dancing in the flames

The day turns to night

I’m afraid that I’ll get burned

You told me not to fear

But how can I not

When your hands

Bring pain

To my surface

The flames grow stronger

Burning me more

Your harsh words making me hate this dance

I beg you to stop

I wanna go back

Can we change the past

Please let me go

I plead but you won’t let me leave

I scream but y...

Sacrifice

The first glance was a spark, so hot it left a mark


The first word started a flame, getting hot enough to maime


Every touch burned with a fire, and so I became a liar


I told you nothing of the pain, I never thought you were to blame


I knew you needed this, needed someone you might miss


So I ignored the pain, all I thought of was what you would gain


You loved me do fiercely I burned; now you’...

Burn To Ash

I loved you so fiercely that you burned; now I’m only left with ashes


Ashes of memories that were supposed to last, like running my fingers through your soft black hair, and laying my love-filled kiss everywhere.


Once, drives through the night, singing and laughing, now listening to those songs, picturing your face there.


You’re no longer here.


My love for you burned so hot.


You’re ash in my ...

Love or Lust

You loved me with such passion,

That I forgot what true love is;

Dazed by what you showed me— what you spoke.

Was it love?

Or was it lust?

The fire licked my skin, its hot tail snaked around my heart,

Gripped it, squeezed it ‘til it almost burst.

You caught me, locked me in a cage, and I, desperate for your love— never questioned.

Behind metal bars, disguised as promises of eternal love,

I lost ...