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Write a poem about the heart, focusing on its physicality and actions.
Avoid the kind of metaphors and language which are normally associated with the heart's emotional connection.
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How The Heart Beats
_The heart's labyrinthine chambers_
_a maze of muscle, blood, and bone_
_four hollowed spaces, each with its own rhythm_
_beating in tandem, a symphony of life_
_Atria, ventricles, septum, and valves_
_a delicate dance of contraction and release_
_deoxygentated blood flows in, a dark, velvety stream_
_oxygenated blood flows out, a vibrant, crimson tide_
_The sinoatrial node, a spark of electricity_
_igniting the heartbeat, a pulse of life_
_the atrioventricular node, a relay station_
_coordinating the beat, a synchronized stride_
_Blood flows, a river of life_
_through coronary arteries, a network of vessels_
_nourishing the heart, a selfless act_
_sustaining the body, a vital fact_
_The heartbeat, a drumbeat in the chest_
_a reminder of life, a pulsing quest_
_to pump, to flow, to nourish and sustain_
_the heart's anatomy, a wondrous, intricate refrain._
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Breath Of Life
**In the quiet opening of each moment,**
**air enters—the invisible gift—**
**through the nose or mouth,**
**guided by the gentle pathways**
**of the nasal cavity,**
**where warm and filter,**
**trapped particles whisper away.**
**Down the trachea, a flexible tube,**
**carrying life’s breath deeper,**
**until it reaches the bronchi,**
**branching like roots into lungs—**
**a forest of delicate alveoli,**
**where exchange begins.**
**Oxygen from the air dissolves into thin walls,**
**merges into blood’s flowing rivers,**
**while carbon, a silent visitor,**
**finds its way back out—**
**a quiet departure—**
**releasing the old to make room for the new.**
**In this dance of molecules,**
**the diaphragm contracts—a steady rhythm—**
**pulling the lungs outward,**
**expanding their silent chambers,**
**then relaxes, releasing,**
**a cycle unbroken,**
**the essence of life’s continuity.**
**Breath—an unspoken language,**
**a steady current beneath our awareness,**
**connecting us to the world,**
**to each other,**
**to the very act of being alive.**
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Anatomy Of A Beginning By SuperGimpChick
In these quiet halls, hormones hum like bees around a sunlit hive,
The body keeping time with a patient, precise music.
Cycles are tides—moon-touched, predictable, insistently new—and the map unfolds without a map makers hand.
Ovaries: two small orchards tucked in the hush of bone and blood,
where eggs begin as possibilities and then wake or drift to sleep again.
FSH, LH, estrogen a chorus moving in and out of rooms unseen,
signaling openings, closings, the soft insistence of chance.
Cycles arrive like seasons, return like old friends with scripts of caution and renewal —
a calendar made of flesh, a garden that remembers.
The uterus holds steady, a field unopened or prepared to yield.
Lining gathers its quiet inventory— thick, then thins, then restarts—
a monthly oath spoken with the rustle of tissue and the hush of breath.
If no seed sings true, the walls loosen, a soft, patient shedding,
clearing space for the next chapter, the next possible chapter.
Outside, male systems ride their own weather: testes, a furnace tempered by time,
where sperm are formed in a patient, careful patience.
Ducts become rivers, course held by memory and function,
and testosterone writes the script —
growth, direction, a craft honed in silence.
The body, in its stubborn normalcy, keeps a rhythm— hops of vitality, the push and pull of need, the call and response of energy.
Then the moment— an almost shy collision, a whisper of fate and chance:
A cell reaches for another, a quiet meeting that might redraw a line on a map.
DNA threads its delicate lace, and the world opens up in a breath held and released.
Not every touch becomes life, not every life begins with a chorus;
consent and chance, a ledger kept in secret chambers of the body and the world.
So I speak of melodies rather than mechanics,
of time as a patient conductor:
The clock and the garden, working in tandem, day after day.
The systems sing in chorus, each a part of a larger scale where life can bloom, or wait, or begin again —
a pulse of possibility, a cadence of care,
the body’s hidden orchestra, playing on.
About This Series
In these pages, the body is a living atlas: circuits hum, organs sing, and rivers of blood keep time with breath. With clarity and imagination, these poems illuminate the intimate architecture of being, turning science into wonder and wonder into song.
Author Bio

Written by SuperGimpChick
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I’m a physically disabled woman that writes stories and poetry. I’m passionate about every I write, but I tend to lean towards the darker themes of life.