Elisekuu123

Elisekuu123

Hi, my name is Elise Moore- Arthur I want to improve my writing so please give feedback

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The Dream

I wake up at the beginning of time

I blink and squint then a see a vine

The verdant diversity of trees it’s a vibe


I lift my head and see a the tranquil azure

The twisted and twine branches I am as sure

As I wish to have peace , some more


Ten I hear a loud piercing, sharp, scream

Then I realise that this is all a dream...

A Whole New World

A creak and a crack a splint then a splash, went the creature lurking into through the empty darkness of the cave.This alien like creature, with fur as soft as a Pom Pom and eyes as big as the the sun. This creature Has no blood line to pass on and no friends to cherish; the no named creature paced around the perimeter of the cave. It was longer for more than a simple low level lifestyle and longi...

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