STORY STARTER
Submitted by Tangerine!
'...and that was the moment that I realized it wasn’t ever the plan for me to make it out alive.'
Write a story which opens or finishes with this line.
Kidnapping
I blink my eyes open, staring into the dimly lit room around me. It takes me several minutes to figure out how I ended up here. The last thing I remember was walking home from school after missing the last bus in the area.
That’s when I heard footsteps behind me—getting closer, matching my pace every time I tried to speed up.
Before I could turn around to check, a piece of cloth came from behind and muffled my screams, cutting off my airflow.
I push myself up from the cold floor, looking around again before making my way to the wooden door at the end of the empty room. I didn’t expect it to be unlocked, but I tried the handle several times anyway.
I cried, screamed, and yelled for help, but was only met with silence—the echo of my own desperate voice.
I press my ear to the door, and when I hear slow footsteps approaching, I back away immediately. My fear spikes when the door unlocks and slowly creaks open, revealing a bearded, broad-shouldered man.
I swallow hard and retreat until I hit the wall, unable to form a single word—only shaky inhales escape my lips.
“Sorry for the uncomfortable room, Amy,” he says, flashing a wicked smile.
I frown at the name.
“My name is… is not Amy.”
He tilts his head, confused.
“I… I’m n-not Amy,” I repeat, fighting back a sob.
“Lying is bad, Amy,” he replies, stepping closer.
“I’m not lying! Amy is… is my neighbor. She’s my age, but I’m not her, I swear.”
He pauses and pulls out his phone, checking something. His jaw clenches, and then he looks back at me.
“Sorry for the mistake. I thought you were Amy,” he says, stepping aside. “You’re free to go. But if you tell anyone—”
“No, I swear I won’t! Please let me go.”
I’ll worry about Amy’s safety later—right now, I just have to run.
After a moment of consideration, he motions for me to leave. Without a second thought, I sprint out of the room, racing toward a large door I assume leads outside. I swing it open and dash into an open lawn.
But the harsh whir of a motor behind me makes me freeze mid-sprint.
I turn around shakily—and there he is. The same man, now holding a chainsaw.
“Run faster, Sarah.”
It was a lie.
I was the target from the beginning.
And that was the moment that I realized it wasn’t ever the plan for me to make it out alive