POEM STARTER
Submitted by HardCoreWriter
Write a poem comparing a house and a home.
The House Was Never the Point
He built it.
Brick by brick,
hands thick with time,
and every tick
was laid in mortar,
love and care
a steady man
in thinning air.
He carved my name
into the frame,
each wall a whisper,
soft acclaim.
Hung windows wide
so I could see
the kind of life
he dreamed for me.
He measured twice,
but never rushed.
He patched my past,
sanded my hush.
Hammered hope
into every floor.
Left a light
behind each door.
He built a house
with heart and hands.
No palace,
but a place that stands.
A place that heard
my quiet ache,
and held me
when I’d start to break.
He made a roof
that knew my rain.
A porch to pace
when I held pain.
He painted ceilings
with belief,
turned my silence
into grief
that dared
to speak.
But I didn’t fall
for beams and stone.
It wasn’t paint
or freshly mown
lawns that made me want to stay.
It was him.
It was his way.
The way he made
each corner breathe.
The way he stayed
when I would leave.
The way his laugh
could warm the tiles.
The way his hands
learned all my miles.
It wasn’t the house
I loved,
not really.
It was him.
And how he held me
fully.
He was the welcome mat and fire,
the coffee scent,
the sweet desire.
The echo when I called too low.
The reason all the curtains glowed.
And I?
I was shelter, too.
Not beams,
but arms
he could lean into.
I gave him rooms
he’d never known,
a place to set
his heavy bones.
And love:
Oh, it bloomed,
slow, like spring.
Like daffodils
that dared to cling
to broken soil
and frozen earth,
but still found light
and claimed their worth.
So now we stand
inside this frame,
the house he built,
but not the same.
Because the truth is clear,
through storms and stone:
We were never lost.
Together,
we just found home.
He was mine.
And I was his.
Not walls,
not roof,
but what love is.
Two hearts that chose
to stay and grow.
He built this house.
But we
made it
home.