WRITING OBSTACLE

Write a fast-paced scene that takes place during a rush hour.

There doesn't need to be a dramatic plot, but think about how you can create and maintain a busy and rushed feeling in a short story.

The Chase

Everything went past in a blur. It all sped past in a flash of buildings and cars. My legs grew heavy and sweat dripped from my forehead as I ran. The fatigue had began to take over me like an infection. But I could not stop.

I could see the figure behind me, gradually coming nearer as it picked up speed and I lost it. Its features were unrecognisable, but you could see evil radiating off of its slender frame.

I avoided the people rushing across the roads and pavements in bustling crowds, but the figure continued its pursuit.

I could run no longer, I collapsed to the ground in exhaustion. All I hoped would that I would not be found…

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