STORY STARTER
Submitted by chiyo đđ¤
âWhy did you kill her!?â
âBecause she was hunting what you needed.â
Write a story which includes this dialogue.
The False Love
As I walked through the door of my studio apartment, my heart dropped and the blood in my veins froze with the realization that I had forgotten our anniversary washed over me. Elizabeth hadnât even reminded me. Why didnât she remind me? The table was set with the good silverware and the finest Dollar Tree china, a new tablecloth spread neatly beneath it. The smell of her famous pot roast filled the air, and our song, Honestly by Cartel, played softly on the stereo. The lights were off, the room lit only by the flicker of candles in that ridiculous candelabra shaped like an octopus butler, the one that doubles as a wine holder. She had spotted it at the thrift store and loved it so much I couldnât say no; she even named it Charlie before weâd left the checkout line. Sheâd gone all out,even splurging on that crystal wine set we had been eyeing at Walmart for months. And I was late,I had forgotten.
I couldnât believe it. I hadnât even thought to call. Iâd just said yes when my boss asked me to stay thirty extra minutes to help close. Just thirty minutes, yet I was late on our anniversary what an ass. By the time I arrived, the candles Liz had lit were nearly burned out. The food sheâd prepared sat cold. Red wine stained the pristine white tablecloth, soaking it like blood, while shattered plates and broken glasses glittered on the floor and then,I saw her. The air vanished from the earth. Time stopped. It felt as if the most skilled torturer in hell was ripping my heart from my chest, splitting my soul in two.
âELIZABETH!â I screamed, half wail, half breathless gasp, as I collapsed to my knees. Crawling across the floor, my hand slipped into her blood, cold and sticky. I didnât care all that mattered was that I got to her. I pulled her lifeless body into my lap, cradling her head.only then did I notice the kitchen knife embeded in her neck to the hilt as sobs tore through me.
âLiz⌠I am so sorry! I should have been here!âmy world was collapsing in arourt me Elisabethâs blood soaking in to my clothes as I held her and wept I noticed someone on the couch. My head snapped up as they spoke
âOh, that wouldnât have helped, silly,â a familiar voice giggled from the living room. âI was actually hoping it would take less time for mine and Bethâs little âgirls nightâ to finish,â Janet cooed âBut she had so many questions. âWhat are you doing in my apartment?â âWho are you?â âHow do you know Tony?â âWhat are you doing with that knife Gosh, it was soooo annoying. So⌠I killed her!â She laughed, high-pitched and giddy.
âCome sit down, honey. Iâll take out the trash later.â My head snapped up. âDonât you dare talk about her like that! And donât call me that, you psychotic bitch, we broke up four years ago!â Rage replaced grief in an instant, burning through me. âOh, I know, baby,â she sang, her voice sugar masking venom. âBut we broke up because that bitch stole you and dragged you across three different states.â
âYou didnât have to kill her⌠Why did you kill her?â I asked, my voice breaking, as I slowly pulled the knife from Elizabethâs neck. Rising to my feet, tears streaming down my face, I kept the blade hidden from Janetâs sight.
âOf course I did, silly,â she chirped, smiling wide. âBecause she was keeping you from what you really needed me.âHer grin widened, eyes alight with madness, as I drove the knife into her heart.