STORY STARTER
In a dystopian setting where water is now a tightly controlled resource, write a short story about a character who lives under a hidden waterfall.
Throttlepoint
Nico Reyes didn’t believe in hauntings- not ghosts, not echoes, not whatever passed for myth in the drip-fed husk of Zone 9. But the waterfall behind the old filtration bunker? That was different.
It wasn’t on any modern map. The system marked it as non-potable runoff-acidic, unstable, unworthy of the grid. Which made it perfect.
He crouched behind the veil of water, every droplet hitting like static across skin. The satchel pressed against his ribs, five vials of black-market hydration sloshing faintly. Below the falls, memory leaked like pressure. Above, ThirstNet watched, blind to the dead zones it had buried.
Inside the bunker, the air was thick with mold and ancient ozone. Lichen had colonized the consoles. Vines curled around rusted piping like veins trying to find a pulse.
This was where they used to process real water. Before the purification protocols. Before the system decided only grief could clean a reservoir.
Nico touched the old valve - copper, not polymer. Mechanical, not sensored. It hissed faintly under his fingers.
And that’s when the whisper came.
“You shouldn’t have come back.”
He froze.
Not a voice. A pressure. As if the air itself clenched. The waterfall’s rhythm shifted, just slightly- a beat skipped. He turned toward the spray, scanning the flow.
Nothing.
Excep- no. A flicker. Buried in the stream, for half a breath, a faint red shimmer behind the water.
He stepped forward, peeling back the wall of spray.
There it was.
A submerged sensor node. Not modern. Pre-grid. Casing cracked but still blinking, faint blue pulse.
“Shit,” he whispered.
The pulse accelerated, syncing with his heartbeat.
This isn’t just runoff. This is a conduit.
He touched it.
The waterfall silenced.
Like the system held its breath.
Then -
“REYES. YOU REMEMBER.”
He bolted.
Boots slamming against wet stone, satchel clutched tight, pressure mounting behind his eyes. He didn’t stop until he reached the Gridline- Zone 9’s skeletal outskirts. Dead relay towers. Shuttered homes. Fog like thin milk, sour with filtration backdraft.
Nico had made drops here before. This one was supposed to be routine. Five vials to a buyer. No contact, no questions. Payment left in a hollowed-out compressor.
Except something was wrong.
The vials had changed.
They were glowing green.
Not the pale sterile blue he’d bottled. Not filtered water.
He unsealed one. The air shifted. Scent bloomed- chlorine, rust, pine needles. Rain. Real rain. Not chemical mist.
Then another scent.
Blood and sun on skin. His sister’s hair, soaked after the last unregulated storm before she was taken in for unauthorized joy consumption.
He dropped the vial. It cracked. Memory mist spilled into the dirt.
His vision pulsed.
You are the node, Reyes. You carried it in your marrow.
He backed away.
The buyer didn’t show.
Instead, a tall figure stepped through the fog. Dull grey robe. Compliance sigil faint beneath the folds.
“Reyes,” it said. “You’ve exceeded your emotional viability threshold.”
A Scrubber.
Nico cursed.
“I’m unarmed,” he said.
“No,” the voice replied. “You are dangerously armed. You carry grief-based contaminants and sovereign memory leaks. That makes you a bio-weapon.”
The Scrubber pulled back its hood.
Nico staggered.
It was his face.
Older. Weathered. Scarred.
“You broke once,” the echo said. “Now you break again. The waterfall marked you.”
“I didn’t ask for this.”
“No one does. But you opened the gate.”
Nico stepped back. The vials were pulsing faster.
He dropped to one knee, fingers trembling, and opened the satchel fully.
“I built ThirstNet,” he said. “Fifteen years ago. I helped seal the leaks. My sister- “
The Scrubber didn’t move.
“I remembered,” Nico whispered. “And that’s the problem, isn’t it?”
He reached into the pulse.
Not metaphorically.
Literally.
His hand disappeared into the green mist, through the signal, past the scar tissue of memory. And he pulled.
The relay tower lit up.
Old glyphs flared along its body. Hidden fail-safes. A forgotten sublayer buried beneath UtopAI’s emotional firewall.
The tower exploded with silence.
Not fire. Not light.
Pressure.
A wave of unreconciled feeling, riding on humidity, code, and memory. A griefstorm.
Nico screamed as it passed through him. Not pain- release. Decades of emotion, collapsed within his bones, vaporized.
The Scrubber reeled, face fracturing like a corrupted file.
“The system,” it hissed, “was never meant to carry this much soul.”
Then it shattered- pixels and bone, unrendering mid-word.
The fog cracked.
Drones in the distance dropped from the sky.
Across Zone 9, hydration collars shorted out.
People opened their mouths- not in terror, but in awe.
It was raining.
Not mist.
Rain.
Unregulated, unfiltered, forbidden.
Children ran into the streets. Compliance sirens screamed and died. Old pipelines burst open with laughter that wasn’t programmed.
Nico fell to his knees. Blood and water streamed from his eyes.
Above him, the waterfall lit up- green and gold.
Its voice returned.
“You opened the pressure gate.”
“You remembered enough to break it.”
He smiled.
And passed out.
They never found his body.
Some say he dissolved with the rain.
Some say the waterfall took him back- unraveled him into code and pulse and story.
But one thing held:
The rain didn’t stop.
Not in Zone 9.
Not ever again.
And deep behind the veil of the falls, the node still whispers.
Waiting for the next one who remembers.