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by Nick Scott @ instagram.com/freetheseagulls

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An R&R Story: Traveling

โ€œSo you donโ€™t eat fish?โ€ Rylee asks, leaning forward on the log.


โ€œI donโ€™t eat fish. I already told you,โ€ Ravi rejects, leaning away and making a face.


Minnows swim around their bare feet, tickling the soles as they dart around, hiding. Rylee smiles, watching them play.


โ€œI donโ€™t like fish much either. Once we went to this buffet, super expensive and shit. I found a glassy eyeball in the fish meat. Black- silver on the back.โ€


โ€œYou did what?โ€ Ravi says, turning to Rylee, laughing but also a little weirded out.


โ€œI meanโ€ฆ I didnโ€™t eat it. But I have an uncle who ate the eye- well this was a crawfish eye. Solid black,โ€ Rylee shrugs.


โ€œGross.โ€

โ€œThatโ€™s what I thought.โ€


The sun warms their backs as they sit, enjoying the day. Rylee had come to India to see Raviโ€™s hometown. She liked it so far. India is a beautiful place.


Rylee had done a wonderful job of only snapping at four people. She hasnโ€™t punched anyoneโ€ฆ yet. So she gives herself a pat on the back for that.


Minus the stares people give her as she walks down the streets with Ravi, she likes it. Especially being with him and seeing everything- his town and home, where he grew up. It makes her feel special, like heโ€™s a green goblin sharing his gold.


Raviโ€™s friends speak in broken English and flourishing Hindi. Rylee likes to sit down beside Ravi and listen- although she hasnโ€™t a clue what theyโ€™re talking about. Ravi often waves his hand when Rylee asks, and tells her itโ€™s โ€œgrown up talkโ€.


Which is bullshit since Ravi is only three years older. Either way, Rylee pouts and stares at the nearest boy until he blushes and looks away. Itโ€™s a game of hers. Make them scared and uncomfortable, then grin about it.


She thinks the boys are talking about her with the way they laugh and smile at her while talking to Ravi. Like theyโ€™re sharing a secret. Her nosy side hates that.


Sometimes she hears them say, โ€œbahenโ€. Which is Hindi for sisterโ€ฆ. She thinks.


Still- Rylee loves India. She might even abandon America for it. Itโ€™d be awesome to write and distribute her books from India. After all, a white girl walking the streets of India is bound to catch an eye or two.


While Rylee ponders the thought of India, Ravi takes her hand and leads her back into town where heโ€™s prepared a wonderful dish of rice- that Rylee has agreed to try.


If, that is, he tries it first. Ravi is truly a horrible cook. And when someone tells you; โ€œIโ€™ve never even cooked this before. How much rice does it say?โ€ And you say: โ€œI canโ€™t read it, Raviโ€ฆ remember?โ€ Then itโ€™s best if the cook tries his masterpiece first.


โ€œDonโ€™t die though. I donโ€™t know Hindi all the way,โ€ Rylee says as Ravi shovels rice and spices into his mouth.


He makes a face, spitting out the food and turning away, โ€œI donโ€™t think I can either. I didnโ€™t follow the instructions, thatโ€™s for sure.โ€


Rylee picks up a piece. โ€œLast time I remember rice never crunched.โ€


โ€œWhat?โ€

โ€œYour rice? Itโ€™s crunchy. Itโ€™s hard.โ€

โ€œWhat?โ€

โ€œDid you cook the rice?โ€


He laughs, โ€œIt didnโ€™t say cook rice. It said add a cup of rice. Iโ€™m not stupid!โ€


โ€œYou didnโ€™t cook the rice?โ€

โ€œNo!โ€

โ€œRaviโ€ฆโ€

โ€œWhat? What?!โ€


Rylee holds in her laugh. โ€œYou cook the rice first. Then you boil the vegetables. Then you make the sauce in another!โ€


โ€œIt didnโ€™t say that. It literally says, โ€˜add in the riceโ€™,โ€ Ravi looks over at the pot. โ€œYou donโ€™t know Hindi.โ€


โ€œJustโ€ฆ let me do the cooking. Alright?โ€

Comments 6

This made me laugh. I love the rice part. It was sweet and funny at the same time!

You guys are so perfect for each other. I hope one day Iโ€™ll have something as beautiful as you two!

Amazing story! I love it!๐Ÿ˜Šโค๏ธ

Oh, I forgot to say I canโ€™t wait for the next one. I always forget to add that part. ๐Ÿ˜‚