POEM STARTER
Submitted by Margaret Sok
Did I cross the line...?
Write a poem or short story about a character going too far.
Line Over Life!
Mommy look at it me,May I ever been that free
May did I cross the line….?
Daddy look that it at me,tell me what did you see
May I ever be able to survive?
All the things you said
All the things you’ve been said,done
Keeps running to my head
Running threw my head
Running through my chest
Really did I ever cross my line? See
Can’t you see this’s?
Ohh,silly me
Still dares to cross the ocean for others,
For you guys,yes!
For whom too, who’s doesn’t wills just to cross
A little bridge for me!
Come on,tells me how’s it’s feels
Tell me how’s it’s feels
Sickens,and tired So isolated….
I keeps thinking that,
How can you leave without me,
Thinking will you be live with out me well?
But Did you still worried about the line.
That line,that I been never wills to cross cowardly
Afraid,fears right!
But still that all I have did! Because…
Can’t you see me?
Yes,I can’t bear to lose you ever over my own
Wills you’ve been seen through as stupidity
Or over mine childish behaviour
Is actually a different things
Desires,dreams,feelings etc disparates!
See? Now you stills thinks!
Like,did i cross the line
That’s been drawn instead it’s dragging on me
Am’I going too far?
Tell,me
What can I tell the ocean
That’s I have been drowning in land lately,even?
Did It’s still counts?
Did I cross the line….. Am’I going too far?